Some writers make the mistake of using too much EXTERNAL
conflict in their romance novels, something always has to be happening from the
outside to affect their hero and heroine’s lives. But what about what happens inside their
hearts and minds? This is INTERNAL
CONFLICT and is just as important, if not more important on occasion, than what’s
happening on the outside.
I’ll give you some examples of INTERNAL conflict from my own
novels:
1. In ‘It Happened
One Summer’, Sandy Perkins has recently lost her fiancé in a motorbike
accident, so when she has the chance to fall in love again, it holds her back
as she fears losing the man she loves.
Without giving too much away, there is a black moment in the novel where
all her fears come to the fore, which puts her through the mill. There is a theme of LOSS throughout the book.
2. In ‘Return to
Winter’, Stephanie Baynham is brought back into contact with the man, Dylan
Pryce-Jones, whom she had a brief encounter with the following year. She had escaped to her grandparent’s hotel
In Italy, only to return to the UK to find out her best friend, Sandy has
arranged for Dylan to pick her up at the airport. On seeing him again she is extremely
conflicted at having to explain herself to him.
There is a lack of TRUST on both parts.
3. In ‘A Taste of
Honey’ Fran Santini is a hopeless honey trapper who sets up men for their
partners to find out whether they would cheat or not. Fran, who also works as a waitress at the
family restaurant, faces internal conflict as she comes from an Italian
Catholic family who would disapprove of
her side job. Even worse, is the fact
that her father employs Travis O’Connell , a Irish chef, who Fran encounters on
his first day, realising he is the man she mistakenly tried to set up the
evening before. He accuses her of having
low morals and she has to convince him otherwise. Travis doesn’t TRUST Fran and Fran doesn’t
TRUST men in general.
4. In ‘Watching You’
Angeline Hamilton not only loses her father, she loses her family home and job too, when new owner, Sebastian Tremaine takes over
Tarrington Manor House. Angeline’s
father had lost his family fortune through a reckless decision, causing
Angeline to not only lose her status in
life, but cope with other losses too.
She has a huge sense of LOSS and ABANDONMENT throughout the story, which affects her
relationship with Sebastian. Learning to
TRUST him is difficult for her.
I find it helpful to compile character charts before writing
a novel to find out more about my characters. What was their family background? Does he or she have a favourite saying? What’s important to them in life? By asking those sorts of questions quite
often other subconscious issues come to the fore, which later becomes the theme
for one of my stories.
If something External is happening throughout the novel, is
there any way this can affect the Internal?
If the hero or heroine has to face their own fears in some way via an
External Conflict, this will ramp up the tension in the book. For example if the hero were drowning and the
heroine has to try to save him but it’s difficult for her as she watched her
brother drown when he was a child. Or if
the hero lost his wife in a car accident but now he needs to let go to allow
the heroine to get into a new car after learning to drive.
Fear ramps up Internal Conflict. Allow your characters to face their fears
head on and you’ll have some great Internal Conflict to use in your novel!
